Hi as part of my PGCE project. I have been experimenting with using ICT to help children collaborate and write stories. I told 2 groups of 3 children from my year 4 class to write a story about 'a day in the life of a superhero' and this is what they came up with in the posts below.

Unfortunately due to the limited time and the children not being familiar with the software, we didn't finish. Can you suggest an ending?

I'd really appreciate it if you could help me by adding positive comments about the stories. Write about anything you liked in the story or thought that they did really well. A few suggestions of how it could be improved would also be welcome.

I will then show the children any comments on friday.

Thanks for your help. Mr Harrison