Thank you for all of your comments. Both myself and the children really enjoyed the project. Writing a story in this way was a new experience for all of us and presented a few challenges along the way. This project is something I hope to do on a whole class basis in the future. Mr Harrison

Thank you for all of your coments but i really liked jackies ending .And i really enjoyed it.by Tyros

i loved you're coments but i realy liked jackies ending.and loved doing the story. by Adam.

Thank you for all your commets.I liked all your ideas for an ending.By Emily

all your cooments are great.by brandon.